Elias
Mage Knight
The Crimson Mage
I'm just saying that the problem isn't going away, no matter how good we get at stabbing them.
Posts: 451
Etruria Fame: 1
Sacae Fame: 2
Lycia Fame: 1
Profession: The Crimson Mage
Affinity: Fire
Profile: Profile (updated)
OoC Alias: Elias
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Post by Elias on Aug 12, 2010 20:03:35 GMT -6
New screenie Gabe, Chelsea, Marle, Aidan, Val, Yaen and Aaron are currently in the game. After I get done with a few more portraits, it might be time to start worrying about growths.
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Post by reylan on Aug 12, 2010 20:11:08 GMT -6
Now that looks promising. Two thumbs up.
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Elias
Mage Knight
The Crimson Mage
I'm just saying that the problem isn't going away, no matter how good we get at stabbing them.
Posts: 451
Etruria Fame: 1
Sacae Fame: 2
Lycia Fame: 1
Profession: The Crimson Mage
Affinity: Fire
Profile: Profile (updated)
OoC Alias: Elias
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Post by Elias on Aug 13, 2010 0:51:08 GMT -6
Moar > Also, I personally think there no other person around that fits Elias more. XP
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Post by Rayl Torien on Aug 13, 2010 1:46:09 GMT -6
before I leave for a few weaks, you should probably get rid of the caps lock XD
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Saturos Prox
Swordmaster
The Wildcard
I'm almost incapable of lying. I'd be a terrible spy.
Posts: 351
Etruria Fame: 1
Profession: Undercover Operative
Affinity: Anima
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Post by Saturos Prox on Aug 13, 2010 10:32:36 GMT -6
Saturos = Gerik Richter = Caellech
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Mavick
Seer
Little Strategist
"The Darkness... It consumes me."
Posts: 208
Etruria Fame: -2
Sacae Fame: 1
Affinity: Dark
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Post by Mavick on Aug 13, 2010 15:56:43 GMT -6
Dozla and Rennac: Lyar and Mavick FTW. What, you think just because I can't pick locks that I'm inferior? I OBLITZERATE YOU ALL!
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Elias
Mage Knight
The Crimson Mage
I'm just saying that the problem isn't going away, no matter how good we get at stabbing them.
Posts: 451
Etruria Fame: 1
Sacae Fame: 2
Lycia Fame: 1
Profession: The Crimson Mage
Affinity: Fire
Profile: Profile (updated)
OoC Alias: Elias
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Post by Elias on Aug 14, 2010 17:42:49 GMT -6
Ok, I've added a few more characters and I understand a bit more how to edit text scenes. I tested it out for the scene in which Chelsea joins. I changed it from being Colm (Tut's) Childhood friend to her being robbed by Tut of her father's keepsake, a dragonstone. It's in this album. Click the link and hit "Next" There's 34 screens in all. I especially want Tut and Chelsea to see, to make sure I didn't mess up their characters. smg.photobucket.com/albums/v491/kijo_fenrir/Hack%20Screenshots/Chelsea%20Scene/?action=view¤t=Chelsea1.pngEdit: Updated Chelsea and Tut status screens.
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Post by Chelsea Dagger on Aug 14, 2010 19:20:12 GMT -6
She wasn't traveling to see the world, she was traveling to find her father, who she didn't know was dead and isn't from a village >_>
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Elias
Mage Knight
The Crimson Mage
I'm just saying that the problem isn't going away, no matter how good we get at stabbing them.
Posts: 451
Etruria Fame: 1
Sacae Fame: 2
Lycia Fame: 1
Profession: The Crimson Mage
Affinity: Fire
Profile: Profile (updated)
OoC Alias: Elias
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Post by Elias on Aug 14, 2010 19:26:07 GMT -6
Sorry, I didn't want to make it that way because her dad wouldn't appear in the game and that'd be a little weird >_> But I'm sure I can change it. It didn't take too long. I was kinda at a lost, so I threw something together at the last moment, it was more for testing then being serious anyways.
Edit: Regardless, is it a little better then suddenly being childhood friend with Tuatara and a crying mid conversation? >_>
If you tell me the details of why she would be chasing after Tut, where she's from (can't be Sacae though since it doesn't exist...), and all that stuff I should be able to make it better. Maybe in a long time I can even play with the supports... Though that would require a better understanding of characters then I have.
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Post by Chelsea Dagger on Aug 14, 2010 20:47:07 GMT -6
You could say Tut stole a family heirloom that her father had left to her before he disappeared, cause that was something I was gonna explore anyways. And you can just say shes from the countryside.
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Elias
Mage Knight
The Crimson Mage
I'm just saying that the problem isn't going away, no matter how good we get at stabbing them.
Posts: 451
Etruria Fame: 1
Sacae Fame: 2
Lycia Fame: 1
Profession: The Crimson Mage
Affinity: Fire
Profile: Profile (updated)
OoC Alias: Elias
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Post by Elias on Aug 14, 2010 20:56:37 GMT -6
Heh, I could actually make a Chelsea specific bow if I wanted. :X But I made the item a Dragonstone because Tut likes collecting them. I actually made a weapon called Anyways, I'll keep that in mind when rewriting it later. However, did the text look odd or out of place or badly formatted? Like I said that was more of a test then trying a serious rewrite. (Though it took about an hour and a half or so to do that much with constant back and forth to make sure the text was formatted right and didn't glitch) Thanks for the info and feedback though
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Post by Chelsea Dagger on Aug 14, 2010 23:36:58 GMT -6
It wouldn't be a bow. It's a secret ^^
The text itself looked fine
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Annette
The "Before" years
[M:0]
"I want to memorize this world into my mind. I hope I can before I must go to a far off place"
Posts: 57
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Post by Annette on Aug 15, 2010 0:21:34 GMT -6
I like it^^
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Morgoth Animus
Shaman
DEAD
"Save the world? You know not what you say."
Posts: 155
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Post by Morgoth Animus on Aug 16, 2010 12:14:00 GMT -6
Wait, I stole something from Chelsea and didn't know it!?
Cool, a Dragonstone. Thx Elias. But it would be hilarious if you mentioned he was Kleptomanic. But it don't look like it'll fit. ;D
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Post by Kelvin H. Calderon on Aug 20, 2010 20:20:44 GMT -6
Stephan can be Artur
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