Zacharia
Shaman
Kingmaker
"You fight for the promise of a better tomorrow for this country."
Posts: 172
Bern Fame: 3
Illia Fame: -2
Profession: Advisor
Affiliation: Bernese Senate
Affinity: Thunder
Profile: Link
OoC Alias: Zach
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Post by Zacharia on Dec 5, 2012 20:28:19 GMT -6
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Zacharia
Shaman
Kingmaker
"You fight for the promise of a better tomorrow for this country."
Posts: 172
Bern Fame: 3
Illia Fame: -2
Profession: Advisor
Affiliation: Bernese Senate
Affinity: Thunder
Profile: Link
OoC Alias: Zach
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Post by Zacharia on Dec 7, 2012 22:49:40 GMT -6
An unemployed mercenary trying to care for his two sons, named Olrik. Calm and reassuring. Here's another one. What do you think?
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Hal
Soldier
Wings of Courage
I've got 99 problems and Elesia caused every one.
Posts: 215
Bern Fame: 1
Lycia Fame: 1
Affinity: Light
Profile: Hal Kailas
OoC Alias: Kenshin
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Post by Hal on Dec 8, 2012 6:44:36 GMT -6
In the first one it appears as if her head was floating inside the cloak.
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Calvin Toros
Pupil
Friendship gives value to survival
Posts: 154
Profession: Bard
Affinity: Light
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Post by Calvin Toros on Dec 8, 2012 7:58:40 GMT -6
I quite like the second one, and the first one too. However, I agree with Hal. For the girl it looks a little like her head is floating. I think the problem might be the way the hair goes over the cloak.
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Zacharia
Shaman
Kingmaker
"You fight for the promise of a better tomorrow for this country."
Posts: 172
Bern Fame: 3
Illia Fame: -2
Profession: Advisor
Affiliation: Bernese Senate
Affinity: Thunder
Profile: Link
OoC Alias: Zach
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Post by Zacharia on Dec 8, 2012 10:08:56 GMT -6
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Calvin Toros
Pupil
Friendship gives value to survival
Posts: 154
Profession: Bard
Affinity: Light
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Post by Calvin Toros on Dec 8, 2012 13:24:33 GMT -6
It looks pretty good but, a little bare. The hair folding over the shoulder was a good idea I think it was just done wrong. Just a thought, maybe the cute was too smooth for the hair? Try putting it back in again and editing the ends to look a little more like hair? As in, not as clean a cut?
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Cyril Schweitzer
Fighter
What's this then, eh!?
Posts: 53
Profession: Rebel Militiaman
Guild: Wolfpack Militia
Affinity: Wind
OoC Alias: Synkkis
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Post by Cyril Schweitzer on Dec 8, 2012 14:45:46 GMT -6
Also, put some shading on her neck in the same direction it is on her face. Would make it look more natural.
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Zacharia
Shaman
Kingmaker
"You fight for the promise of a better tomorrow for this country."
Posts: 172
Bern Fame: 3
Illia Fame: -2
Profession: Advisor
Affiliation: Bernese Senate
Affinity: Thunder
Profile: Link
OoC Alias: Zach
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Post by Zacharia on Dec 10, 2012 20:02:20 GMT -6
Sorry for being late with this: I can't help but dislike the bottom right corner shading of her hair.
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Cyril Schweitzer
Fighter
What's this then, eh!?
Posts: 53
Profession: Rebel Militiaman
Guild: Wolfpack Militia
Affinity: Wind
OoC Alias: Synkkis
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Post by Cyril Schweitzer on Dec 10, 2012 20:45:04 GMT -6
I agree. I requires more detail. It looks more like a bolt of cloth than hair falling over the collar and shoulder.
Consider moving the right side of the hair off of the shoulder-proper and adding some shading to show how the lengths of hair kind of differentiate from eachother. It's hard to explain.
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Zacharia
Shaman
Kingmaker
"You fight for the promise of a better tomorrow for this country."
Posts: 172
Bern Fame: 3
Illia Fame: -2
Profession: Advisor
Affiliation: Bernese Senate
Affinity: Thunder
Profile: Link
OoC Alias: Zach
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Post by Zacharia on Dec 11, 2012 18:44:59 GMT -6
A knight of Illia named Murphey, fresh out of training. Straightforward, almost to the point of being blunt. Once more with feeling.
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Cyril Schweitzer
Fighter
What's this then, eh!?
Posts: 53
Profession: Rebel Militiaman
Guild: Wolfpack Militia
Affinity: Wind
OoC Alias: Synkkis
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Post by Cyril Schweitzer on Dec 12, 2012 0:01:39 GMT -6
Fantastic.
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Zacharia
Shaman
Kingmaker
"You fight for the promise of a better tomorrow for this country."
Posts: 172
Bern Fame: 3
Illia Fame: -2
Profession: Advisor
Affiliation: Bernese Senate
Affinity: Thunder
Profile: Link
OoC Alias: Zach
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Post by Zacharia on Dec 13, 2012 22:37:40 GMT -6
The sons of Olrik, named Baren and Harpin, respectively. The only difference between the appearance of the two is their height.A spy in training who survived the destruction of Ostia. A bit of a wimp, she rarely strays from Murphey's side.
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Zacharia
Shaman
Kingmaker
"You fight for the promise of a better tomorrow for this country."
Posts: 172
Bern Fame: 3
Illia Fame: -2
Profession: Advisor
Affiliation: Bernese Senate
Affinity: Thunder
Profile: Link
OoC Alias: Zach
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Post by Zacharia on May 19, 2013 20:30:36 GMT -6
Cheryl's avatar, with cape and without.
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Selibas
Hero
The Little Wolf
My Word is Iron.
Posts: 455
Etruria Fame: -1
Bern Fame: 4
Illia Fame: -3
Profession: Khan
Guild: Tribe of Sacae
Affinity: Ice
OoC Alias: Selibas
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Post by Selibas on May 26, 2013 13:35:03 GMT -6
Pretty ballin' mate.
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Zacharia
Shaman
Kingmaker
"You fight for the promise of a better tomorrow for this country."
Posts: 172
Bern Fame: 3
Illia Fame: -2
Profession: Advisor
Affiliation: Bernese Senate
Affinity: Thunder
Profile: Link
OoC Alias: Zach
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Post by Zacharia on May 27, 2013 20:00:30 GMT -6
Nggh this feels a little half-baked, but I thought I might as well post Helios' sprite here while I'm working on Yunneth's. So here you go: Thoughts, digressions, any specific comments about what goes where? Also, tell me if you need help setting it as an icon, but you should be fine.
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