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Post by Matthias on Apr 14, 2006 12:06:38 GMT -6
I know you want to read them, and they're right there. But, since I don't think that people particularly want others to post in them,if you feel the urge to do so, post here. Got it? :Glares at alexia:
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Post by Alexia on Apr 14, 2006 12:07:55 GMT -6
I get the hint...
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Post by Alexia on Apr 14, 2006 12:09:32 GMT -6
BTW, I approved Matthias' , so don't worry ^.^
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Post by Alan on Apr 14, 2006 12:17:59 GMT -6
Comments on my story, please?
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Post by redd on Apr 14, 2006 12:30:39 GMT -6
One for all of you is length, not to say any of you suffer from that Although I find long stories boring to read... Unless it's like interesting... Also add detail...
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Post by redd on Apr 14, 2006 12:46:25 GMT -6
More pointts to consider:
Punctuation Spelling (Those are obvious) Don't rush too much.
All these points were obvious, but I get to type, yay!
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Rath
The "Before" years
[M:10]
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Post by Rath on Apr 14, 2006 14:38:58 GMT -6
I know mine isn't that good
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Post by Alan on Apr 14, 2006 14:52:44 GMT -6
The only usefull thing I have heard is don't rush it, I tend to do that anyway Chapter 2 in progress.
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Post by Matthias on Apr 15, 2006 6:47:30 GMT -6
Well, that's what editing is for. I'll fix the punctuation and stuff later. Jeez, are they really that bad?
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Post by Matthias on Apr 15, 2006 12:23:40 GMT -6
Hey, Alan, I've read yours. Good job. Can't wait to see the conversations between Alan and Vaida. Just out of curiousity, will Heath show up too? Or is that not canon?
I know Kenshin doesn't like the FE cameos, but I don't see the problem, as long as we don't make them too important to the storyline. I mean, the monk Matthias met could've been just about anybody, I just made it Lucius because I could. And, though I may be punished for it, I'm planning another cameo shortly. I seriously don't see the problem... especially if we pick the ones that have names close to the guys we've got.
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Post by Alan on Apr 15, 2006 13:45:46 GMT -6
from what I can make up from supports, Heath is in Vaida's unit, I will mention him in chapter 3.
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Post by Matthias on Apr 16, 2006 18:14:47 GMT -6
gotcha. I didn't get the supports. I'm almost as much anti-wyvern as I am anti-fighter.
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Post by Alan on Apr 18, 2006 8:28:15 GMT -6
I undertand you dislike wyverns because they are slow but why Heath? He is faster then Farina!
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Post by redd on Apr 18, 2006 9:15:34 GMT -6
Heath looks weird and joins late, I also seem to recall there being quite a few Axe-users and Bow users near his recruitment chapter and beyond. Plus he doesn't start off too fast.
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Post by redd on Apr 18, 2006 9:19:47 GMT -6
Not that I mind that he looks weird >.> He also has no triangle attack >.>
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