Chrollo

[chrollo]

Name: Chrollo Yamamoto
Class: Myrmidon
Dragon Element: N/A
Age: 26
Born in: sacae
Appearance: Chrollo is slim, tall (about 5.11), weighs about 130Lbs, has long black hair that is partly messy, and wears red armor with a cape.
His left hand has a glove because that is his fighting hand.

Personality: Chrollo, like his father Masa, is a nice, friendly, person who is talented in swordsmen ship and technique.

History: Chrollo grew up in a small farm in the outskirts of sacea. when he was just a boy a sickness broke out in the family taking the life of his father Masa a talented swordmaster, and his mother Cilla, an alchemist of unknown skill.
After his parents death he was raised by his grandfather who taught him the same swordsmanshipas his father, however Chrollo was never able to master it due to his habit of using his left hand. As a result, Chrollos grandfather was forced to create a new technique for Chrollo called the left-hand tempest. This technique is when the user spins the sword 360 above his head while slowly tilting it to the enemy and then in the middle of the whirl quickly twisting the blade so that it darts to the left and strikes the opponent and leaves an opening for the user. This not only allows an almost unpredictable attack but also creates a formidable defense.

NPC fight: Chrollo, now living by himself has once again been challenged by a bandit at his farm. Chrollo knows that he must defend what his parents have left him, however the amount of trouble it has been attracting has been unbearable. "very well then. you will be yet another to face my left-hand swordsmen ship." says Chrollo. "im so scared" says the bandit sarcastically."
Drawing out his sword with his left hand, he begins spreading his feet to the right position to execute his secret technique. the bandit pulls out his axe and prepares to battle. within the blink of an eye both fighters have flashed at each other. they are swinging very fast, considering the weapon triangle, Chrollo knows he is at the advantage. all of a sudden the bandit steps back and loads up. Chrollo knows whats next and quickly slashes his sword to the left and twists his wrist, it has begun, the sword swings aggressively like a tornado around his head and he tilts it at the fly axe coming at him and easily defects it. The bandit now stands weaponless and is unable to react as Chrollo jerks his wrist and the blade falls off the whirlwind and strikes the bandits leg. the bandit falls the floor.
"is that all?" says Chrollo, "please spare me!" screams the bandit. "well u better start crawling". the bandit starts to limp away into the distance. "maybe i should ditch this place" says Chrollo.

PC fight: Im sorry im a new role player and trying to learn so i hope this works, though i am having trouble coming up with a play v player rp i will say my understanding so that hopefully i will be able to use my character to learn. So with that being said so far ive learned that in a pvp rp or in any basic rp you must give all participants a equal chance, this means that unless you totally out rank or skill the other you should be equally in danger as your opponent. this also includes having OP abilities and any loop wholes that take away that danger factor. i hope this will suffice at least until i learn first hand more about pvp rp and i hope you will understand my position due to the fact that this is basically the only thing holding me back, thnx for feedback so far. (these techniques he uses are for the rps sake, however, they count as a basic attack)

[Nayru Al-Saiduq]

His last name is Left Hand?

Myrmidons typically don't wear actual armor - kinda their thing - you might be looking more at a Mercenary class choice if you want to be an armored swordsman.

When you say his mother was an alchemist, what kind of alchemy are you referencing?

Special sword techniques aside, you won't be able to use it as entirely unpredictable or a perfect defense in roleplay. You're a basic Myrmidon or Mercenary, you have to work for it.

Weapons triangle isn't really a thing here, muted at best. It definitely does not make you immune to axes. You also kinda destroyed that bandit with your super technique.

Quicknado is another thing you need to actually develop - your character is NOT a raging badass at level 1.

[chrollo]

Hes not a raging badass because his skill does not increase. Hes simply irrational its a personality. Also his technique is still a basic attack doing basic damage Nayru Al-Saiduq Al-Saiduq

[Emil Aurion]

The history is extremely lacking, it only tells us about how he's left handed and his grandfather created a whole new fighting style based on it.

I skimmed the NPC fight, this is a realistic fantasy based RP with strong Fire Emblem references when it comes to the classes and setting. The way you wrote that battle it felt more like Dragon Ball Z.

[chrollo]

Emil Aurion Aurion do I redo? If u accept me ill work on my rp skills

[Emil Aurion]

Looking at the PC fight as well it's just round 2 of the NPC fight. The NPC fight example fight needs to be tone downed to be that of a level one fighter, in the actual game senses, but the PC fight needs to reflect if you're fighting against another player. You can't control other player's characters unless given permission. The goal with the NPC and PC fight section is to ensure everybody understands the rules so nobody else gets upset because you make somebody else's character react in a way they wouldn't or you're not RPing a literal god.

I suggest you look at [url+http://fewotw.proboards.com/thread/4540/starting-out]this[/url] and click each link then rewrite the fight sections as well as expand more on the character history. The staff wants to make you've got an understanding of the rules prior to joining the RP section, skill wise we're pretty lax because a few of us had learned that the more you RP the better your skills will improve.

[chrollo]

Emil Aurion Aurion i appreciate the help im sorry if i come across as spamming, i just want to learn rp better because up until now i just did unregulated rp and i hated OP people who controlled my character. also what do u thing about bringing in a d&d die to simulated chance of dodging and luck, just suggestion.

[Emil Aurion]

It had been a thought many, many years ago but there's a HUGE problem with it. Since this isn't a table top game, or hosted on platforms such as Roll20 doing dice rolls doesn't work. Land on a 1? Reroll. Not a number you want? Reroll till it's a hit/miss. I'll relook at your app once I hit a save point on the game I'm playing.

[chrollo]

alright thanks man hope u win, good night Emil Aurion Aurion ive redone what i could

[Emil Aurion]

The NPC fight is still too flashy for somebody who would still be new to fresh combat. I would also like to see a little more about the character's history than the sword style.