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Jul 21, 2009 14:26:18 GMT -6
Post by Kasey on Jul 21, 2009 14:26:18 GMT -6
Name: Kasey Class: Cleric Hair Color: Light Blue Eye Color: Blueish-green Age: 13 Appearance: Clothes: purple tunic Born in: Arphen Story: She was taken by bandits while walking through the mountains with her brother, Abel, when she was five years old. When Abel tried to fight them off they laughed and threw him to the side. They grabbed her and put a sack over her head. She has been with the bandits ever since, until recently when she escaped them and found a town. She soon ran into a boy named Eric who while taking her to his house, explained they were in Lycia. She told him about healing a person once by accident. Eric then told her she should go to the church. She went to the church and after explaining to the monks began her training.
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Kasey
Jul 21, 2009 14:49:40 GMT -6
Post by Gabriel on Jul 21, 2009 14:49:40 GMT -6
Let me see if I get this right. She was kidnapped at age 5. She was with the bandits for a few months, before she escaped. And now, at age 13, she is still wandering the desert, looking for PEOPLE or WATER?
How did she survive those 8 years to begin with?
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Kasey
Jul 21, 2009 19:28:48 GMT -6
Post by Aeros on Jul 21, 2009 19:28:48 GMT -6
Maybe she CONTINUES to look for water, after finding several sources and using them for a time?
Or, Aimee (I'm assuming that's you), you could take her out of the desert, put her in Ilia, and have her meet Abel there. Or you could put her in Lycia and have her meet up with Aeros and the gang...after all, Eric should join them there, so you could be staying with his family.
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Kasey
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Jul 22, 2009 21:08:38 GMT -6
Post by Kasey on Jul 22, 2009 21:08:38 GMT -6
Well yes, i am Aimee but ya I was trying to meet up with the gang but Jese's the one who helped me with the story by telling me about whats going on with you guys.
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Wyatt
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Kasey
Jul 22, 2009 21:26:38 GMT -6
Post by Wyatt on Jul 22, 2009 21:26:38 GMT -6
More problems abound. If she's been with the bandits all this time, how has she become a cleric? If you were making her a brigand or a mercenary or any martial class really, I'd not ask a question. Spend time around fighters, learn how to fight.
However, Bandits don't strike me as the Clericy type, so that makes no sense.
Suggestions: If you really want to do that 'captured by bandits' thing. Why don't you have her escape into a Lycian town close to their base, and spend time at a church that takes her in learning to become a cleric. She then meets up with Eric and the story begins.
Just a suggestion so you don't think I am blasting you with no help, do not feel pressured to take it. Though you can if you wish.
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Kasey
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Jul 23, 2009 12:13:28 GMT -6
Post by Kasey on Jul 23, 2009 12:13:28 GMT -6
Thanks for your help. I'm not good at making up stories exactly my brother liked this site and recomended it and explained a little about it, and i thought I would like it too. Well also the thing about the cleric is I dont like fighting stuff much so I thought I might like to be a cleric.
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Kasey
Jul 23, 2009 12:23:54 GMT -6
Post by Wyatt on Jul 23, 2009 12:23:54 GMT -6
Being a cleric is not the problem, I have no issues with that at all. Allow me to explain a little:
A cleric is a member of the church of St. Elimine, and a pious individual. They, like most spellcasters, have to study to learn their ability to channel magic and heal. It is not something one can 'teach themselves', though people may have the affinity for certain types of magic.
Someone with potential for healing magic could find this out by accident if they were in possession or immediate vicinity of a healing staff. But that does need to be expounded upon. Exactly where and when did she gain the powers of a cleric?
If you still have trouble with this, you should ask your friends who play here. As they know you IRL (I assume) they can probably help you better then I can.
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Kasey
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Jul 23, 2009 12:34:11 GMT -6
Post by Kasey on Jul 23, 2009 12:34:11 GMT -6
Ok thank you.
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Jul 27, 2009 9:57:29 GMT -6
Post by Kasey on Jul 27, 2009 9:57:29 GMT -6
Did I get it right this time?
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Kasey
Jul 27, 2009 10:32:25 GMT -6
Post by Wyatt on Jul 27, 2009 10:32:25 GMT -6
That's a yes. It's a good start, I look forward to seeing what kind of a character she will mature into. And now the big words. Accepted.
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Kasey
Jul 27, 2009 14:38:31 GMT -6
Post by Kasey on Jul 27, 2009 14:38:31 GMT -6
Cool, thanks!
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