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Post by gabbiano on Aug 2, 2009 17:44:51 GMT -6
Name: Gabbiano Class: Theif -> Rouge Hair Color: Dark Brown Eye Color: Mystical Green Age: 19
Appearance/Personality: Tall and somewhat thin; not muscular. His facial build resembles that of someone who is carefree, but he can get serious when he needs to. (6' tall, weighs in at 140) He is very intelligent, and values that trait about himself. He has moderate battle experience.
Clothes: He wears a high-collared cloak, concealing a plain, olive green tunic, and long, gray shorts.
Story: What is known of Gabbiano is known by his few selected friends and what family he has left. He grew up alone; he was subject to much physical abuse from his father. Because of this, he also grew up learning to be stealthy and sneaky to get past him. As he grew up, he left his home and lived on the outskirts of Ilia, alone, with but enough to shelter only himself. As he grew older, he did much self studying and has become a very wise person.
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Post by Wyatt on Aug 2, 2009 18:25:26 GMT -6
It's not lifeless. It shows great room for growth through RP. There is little there, but the little you do have leaves no doubts in my mind about the quality of your writing.
That's my thing, quality over quantity.
Accepted.
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Post by gabbiano on Aug 2, 2009 18:59:12 GMT -6
Well, thank you. I've always taken my writing very highly. I finished my statsheet, in case you're one of the people to approve those. That is, if you approve them at all.
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Post by Wyatt on Aug 2, 2009 19:27:48 GMT -6
Stat sheets are considered out of game, and as such do not need to be approved. (Thank god for that, SIXTEEN speed?!) However I will ask a few questions.
1: Slim sword does not start with 90 uses, if the CAW thread still says that I will fix it. 2: Iron Sword and Llran Sword? No go, you get the basics like everyone else. The ONLY exception to this is items that are 'just for show'. Like Rayl's Cookbook, or Wyatt's smith hammer. If you have it as a prop item it can NEVER be used in any combat situation, ever.
...Well I might excuse it if it's something like a sword gets partially blocked by Rayl's cookbook, which happened to be in his breast pocket, but you get the idea.
3: I'd prefer if you found another face, you can use that for now, but feel free to post in one of the many artist threads in the General Board to see if someone will make one for you. Our artists are quite talented.
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Post by gabbiano on Aug 3, 2009 7:18:22 GMT -6
Yeah, that's cool, I can fix all that. I made my own portrait using even a different character. I pasted it into paint and did some work on it, and changed the name, etc. As you've probably seen, it's my new avatar. But, it's a png file and i need it as a GIF file. How do I convert it? And I did the slim sword with 90 uses because I had seen everyone else's statsheets like that; i apologize for being so quick to make it without reading everyting. It will be fixed asap.
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Post by Wyatt on Aug 3, 2009 9:41:08 GMT -6
o-O. Yeah....wow that's...just wow...
You might want to ask someone to look at that avatar. I'll be honest, as is my way, it looks like ass.
Everything needed is fine and you are good to go.
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Post by gabbiano on Aug 3, 2009 9:43:18 GMT -6
Yeah, i know it looks like ass. But I'm not sure how to go about asking for an avatar. I mean, i can well find the message board to post it on, but should i describe how i want it, or just let them do whatever?
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Post by Wyatt on Aug 3, 2009 9:52:14 GMT -6
Basic physical description of your character works well. You gave a fine description of the clothing, but what about hair color/style and eye color and such? Add in a few more details and I guarantee they can make awesome work for you.
Hell, I got this picture by saying. "Young looking axeman with wild fire red hair. BAM!
They are very helpful, give em a day or two and you too will look badass!
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Post by Wyatt on Aug 3, 2009 10:15:43 GMT -6
Added? Huh?
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