Young Flame (Veigue's Past)
Jun 21, 2012 2:42:40 GMT -6
Post by Deleted on Jun 21, 2012 2:42:40 GMT -6
This is a small past telling of Veigue's childhood. I'm not sure if I want to make it into a constant updated story, but I thought I'd share it with you all just in case I do (which is highly unlikely).
So...getting straight to it, here we go. Feel free to comment.
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Young Flame
The Beginning
It was a clear and bright morning. Very sunny and no trace of a storm cloud. This beauty made the plains of Sacae stand out after all. There was even a chilly breeze blowing on through in conjunction with the heat, giving the weather a warm and humid temperature for my body. In the center of a very enormous clearing, I was standing out by a large tree that was sitting next to some bushes in front of the man that I called ‘father’.
“That’s all you’ve got, boy? Show me more!” his deep, yet strict voice sounded in my ears.
The man had the appearance of a master swordsman of Sacae, having his blade drawn in front of me as I wielded a wooden sword and a long stick nearly the same length as the training weapon in my other hand, but holding it in reverse like it was a sheath. One would think that if you were training a newbie like me, you wouldn't use your real weapon...especially since my weapons were made of wood. But at the time, I was too passive with it and shrugged it off as his way of taking me seriously.
When I swung the wooden sword and stick at the swordmaster, the attacks came out awkwardly and clumsy-like, ultimately missing my target every time as my father seemed to hardly place effort in dodging.
“Veigue!!” he shouted again with a disappointed reaction. “...Your stance is wrong. Your attacks are unbalanced and you’re not focusing at all. Show me more effort!”
“...I-I’m sorry, father. I’m trying!” I tried to make an excuse. But I honestly was trying as hard as I could.
I braced myself again and tried to confront him, trying to get into the proper stance of the fighting style I was being taught. I couldn’t help but being disappointed in myself as well, as I tried time and time again to land a single blow on my father. But my attacks came out slow and predictable...and every time I missed, the more and more I saw that disappointed look on my father’s become deeper. It made me lose a bit more focus when I swung my sword so hard that I ended up spinning around a few times and ended up shoving myself into my father.
When I looked up, he seemed like he couldn’t tolerate anymore of my failures, since he only moved back a single step and maintained that angry look. He then shoved me backwards with his elbow and charged at me like he intended to harm. He kicked my wooden sword out my hand, then swung his sword one time. I tried to dodge it, but I wasn’t fast enough. I turned to my side and ended up getting a cut from his Wo Dao’s edge to my left arm. Afterwards, he delivered a punch to my cheek, throwing my footing completely off balance as I stumbled and fell down on my back, dropping the stick out my other hand and covering my bleeding wound in pain. Then I saw the shadow of my father covering me completely. When I raised my head, I saw him sheathe his sword slowly, but he slammed it in it's saya out of anger.
“...I didn’t see any kind of reflex to my attacks. What if I aimed for a vital point? What if I was intent on killing you just now?! You would have died, boy!”
As I listened, I tried my best to let go of my wound and reach for my wooden stick, but my father placed his foot in front of my hand to stop me.
“You think you can try again? You’re only wasting your time.”
“But...father! I can still--!”
“No! Lay your sorry excuse for a swordsman on the ground and bleed some more for your failure. Your sister had significant skill when she was your age and was able to endure this training with ease!”
He was comparing me to my sister...who was completely a different person. Yes, Lena was definitely a prodigy, but I really dislike it when I’m compared to others. Though at that particular time as a child, I didn’t understand. I was all about trying to impress my old man. However, he did nothing but return my love with hatred, but I was persistent and tried time and time again to live up to expectations...if he allowed me. I harbored no jealousy of my sister...in fact, I loved her the most out of anyone.
“If you can make it back home without me, then I MAY consider taking you seriously again. I at least taught you survival techniques. Hopefully you aren't a failure at that either...” my father walked off on his own as he was heading back to the direction of our village. “...Until then, take the time you have on your own to think about taking this training more seriously.”
As I watched him walk off, I held my wound again. I didn’t even remember the punch I received after the cut, but when I did, it made my pain worse. I reached out for my wooden sword, but as I kept grabbing it and trying to get a firm grip, I ended up staining the handle with blood. I grabbed the stick I had and tried my best to tie them both around my waist while dealing with the misery of my injury.
When I was finally finished, I limped my way near the path my father took, but he was long gone already. I used a cloth I had to tie it around my wound to at least stop myself from leaking with blood. Despite the village only being a few miles away, it was going to be a real painful journey back. It was like I was left to die. Thankfully, the animals weren't harmful. I just had to survival the walk...
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I finally made it, but the evening struck. It only took so long because I eventually stopped walking several times and ended up losing energy from concentrating too much on my wound. I didn’t have any vulneraries, so I had to improvise with stuff I found on the way. It didn’t work too well, but the bleeding did stop when I made it back. To the point where I barely felt the wound. As such, I slowly entered the village on my way home. I could finally walk without a limp anymore.
I walked through the village and passed through the other Sacaeans from the Kutolah. None of them seemed to be concerned with me...In fact, I don’t even think anyone was paying attention to me strolling along. But that was normal. People just saw me as some stupid kid. But I didn’t care...and I still don’t to this day. Soon, my pain turned to anger. I hated being around others mainly because I was never taken seriously by any of them other than my sister and mother. I still loved my father, despite his resentment for me. But what could I say? I was just a ‘stupid kid’ after all, but that love for him was about to change...
As I was almost at my family’s hut, I was blocked by three other younger Sacaean children when I fell down to my knees from my wound again. Out of any time the pain could come back, why at that moment? Either way, they all seemed to be enjoying themselves as they looked down on me like they wanted to do something to me. I saw them before...days ago. Ever since I accidentally bumped into their little 'ring leader', they all never stopped bothering me...and no one does nothing but watch. Is there entertainment in seeing a child beaten by others? I'd like to believe not and think it was either them ignoring us or just people being bastards.
“Hey, look. It’s Veigue...” the child standing in the middle said with a grin. “Having trouble? How about I help you up?”
I couldn’t believe those words. It was too deceiving. But me, desperately wanting to get back home to father, held out my hand, giving a gesture to help me. My hand got grabbed, but I saw the smirk form on the little bastard’s face as I felt him squeeze my hand and yanked me up from the ground. Then a suffered a kicked to my side and got sent back down. After a few more seconds, the other two joined in and started repeatedly kicking me while I was defenseless in the dirt. I refrained from screaming out of pain so I took the hits, crossing my arms and trying to curl up into a little ball on the ground. I tried closing my eyes to help a little. At least it was working.
I opened them again when I saw my father’s feet behind the children. I thought my father had finally come back for me. Was he going to save me from these brats? But I heard him talking in disappointment again.
“...Veigue? Didn’t I tell you how to defend yourself? If you’re expecting my help, then you’ll have to earn it.” I saw him crossed his arms, waiting. “Show me what I taught you to get these troublemakers off you.”
That was absolutely absurd and heartless thing to say! Was he really going to sit there and watch me get beat up while having my face full of dirt?! Nonetheless, I needed to get those punks off me regardless of what my father was going to do. I felt the rage build up in my heart. I couldn’t take it anymore. I was tired of being everyone’s punching bag. I had to show them that I meant business.
I grabbed one of the boy’s legs and pulled back, tripping him and causing him to hit the dirt on his back. This caused them to stop kicking me for a brief few seconds, which was plenty of time for me to try and get them all back. I pulled out my wooden weapons and started beating one of them mercilessly on his head with them, since he gave me that opportunity when he placed his hands over his head. But the other one grabbed me from behind and pinned me down. The other one I tripped raised from the ground and they all proceeded to kicking me again as I dropped my weapons.
So much for a comeback.
“...Hmph. How disappointing. I don’t have weak children.” my strict parent said aloud.
I tried holding out my hand to my father, but he simply ignored me as I saw him walk back to our hut. For that moment, I finally felt betrayed. How come my childish mind didn't catch on the moment I was left to die out in the plains? He didn’t even give it second thought to help. He left me...just like that. I even saw him enter the hut without looking back. No regret.
...Nothing could express how I was feeling at the moment. I didn’t even feel the kicks anymore. I clenched the ground in my anger. It seemed like I didn’t release all the rage I had back there after all, as I still had faith in my father at the time. That was it...I couldn't take this pain anymore. Both the pain being dealt physically...and the pain emotionally. It hurt so bad, it felt like my entire body was on fire.
Now I was at that boiling point where I found the strength to lift them all off me and didn’t even think about getting my wooden weapons. I lifted myself up and tackled the boy that started all this mess to the ground and started punching him non-stop in the face like a raging beast. I couldn’t control myself...I needed to let it all out. No one should feel how I did at that moment. Plus, the little punk deserved it. People were walking away from the scene, trying not to get involved. So I was alone...
As I tried to calm down, I raised off the boy, who had a bloody nose and bruised up face. When I looked to the other two with a cold stare, they both merely backed off and started walking back as I slowly approached them. I was tired of getting treated like crap. Now I was ready to inflict some of the pain I’ve been feeling throughout my abuse. But the two little punks ran away before I could do anything. If they were smart, they could have taken advantage of my rage and beat me to a pulp worse than before...but that's how fear worked.
I walked to the other I roughened up and kicked him hard enough to jump from the ground and follow his friends, but he was slow due to the pain I inflicted. He doubt this was the end though. Even when beaten, some bullies get persistent if they could push you the way they did to me.
With them gone, I looked down to the ground and stared in space, thinking about everything that just happened. Normally, this would be a perfect time to cry for normal people...but I didn’t. If anything, I’ve always wondered why no matter what happened, I never shed a tear. Of course I cried when I was a small baby, but when I got to that age I was, I couldn’t remember a time I cried at all. I even went as far as to thinking that my eyes were dried up and unable to drop anything. I felt so much sorrow at the moment, but I couldn’t express it at all other than anger. Sometimes, I even doubted if I was a normal human being if I couldn't express my sadness like a normal little boy.
I eventually fell down on my knees, trying to calm down. It was then that I felt someone’s arms wrap around me like a blanket. When I turned my head, it was my older sister, Lena. Her voice was soft as usual, but I can tell by her lower tone in voice that she was hurting pretty badly on the inside.
“...If only father didn’t tell me to stay in, I would have helped. I’m sorry, Veigue...”
I just sat there, still paralyzed in thought. This day turned from bad to evil. Not only did I ended up getting bullied AGAIN, but I had my own father walk off on me instead of being an adult and stopping what unfolded. That man...I couldn’t call him father anymore. In fact, I did exactly what he did to me...I despised him greatly. I only had a mother and a sister then. At least they treated me with respect compared to that bastard and the others of the village. But my sister was always there to comfort me in my time of need. I still respect my mother, but at the time, she was too sick to parent me. Lena basically looked after me all the time. But my mom couldn't help it...she was born with that illness.
“You are strong, Veigue. Don’t let anyone tell you otherwise...show them all. I have faith in you, little brother.”
I didn’t say anything in response. I couldn’t really. But I took those words as an inspiration to get stronger and more skilled...not just stronger in general, but stronger than the ones who put me down, abused me, and despised my existence. Even if I have to respond to them all coldly. I no longer had a reason to act friend towards others like a little kid. I was going to show them all a true warrior of Sacae!
So...getting straight to it, here we go. Feel free to comment.
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Young Flame
The Beginning
It was a clear and bright morning. Very sunny and no trace of a storm cloud. This beauty made the plains of Sacae stand out after all. There was even a chilly breeze blowing on through in conjunction with the heat, giving the weather a warm and humid temperature for my body. In the center of a very enormous clearing, I was standing out by a large tree that was sitting next to some bushes in front of the man that I called ‘father’.
“That’s all you’ve got, boy? Show me more!” his deep, yet strict voice sounded in my ears.
The man had the appearance of a master swordsman of Sacae, having his blade drawn in front of me as I wielded a wooden sword and a long stick nearly the same length as the training weapon in my other hand, but holding it in reverse like it was a sheath. One would think that if you were training a newbie like me, you wouldn't use your real weapon...especially since my weapons were made of wood. But at the time, I was too passive with it and shrugged it off as his way of taking me seriously.
When I swung the wooden sword and stick at the swordmaster, the attacks came out awkwardly and clumsy-like, ultimately missing my target every time as my father seemed to hardly place effort in dodging.
“Veigue!!” he shouted again with a disappointed reaction. “...Your stance is wrong. Your attacks are unbalanced and you’re not focusing at all. Show me more effort!”
“...I-I’m sorry, father. I’m trying!” I tried to make an excuse. But I honestly was trying as hard as I could.
I braced myself again and tried to confront him, trying to get into the proper stance of the fighting style I was being taught. I couldn’t help but being disappointed in myself as well, as I tried time and time again to land a single blow on my father. But my attacks came out slow and predictable...and every time I missed, the more and more I saw that disappointed look on my father’s become deeper. It made me lose a bit more focus when I swung my sword so hard that I ended up spinning around a few times and ended up shoving myself into my father.
When I looked up, he seemed like he couldn’t tolerate anymore of my failures, since he only moved back a single step and maintained that angry look. He then shoved me backwards with his elbow and charged at me like he intended to harm. He kicked my wooden sword out my hand, then swung his sword one time. I tried to dodge it, but I wasn’t fast enough. I turned to my side and ended up getting a cut from his Wo Dao’s edge to my left arm. Afterwards, he delivered a punch to my cheek, throwing my footing completely off balance as I stumbled and fell down on my back, dropping the stick out my other hand and covering my bleeding wound in pain. Then I saw the shadow of my father covering me completely. When I raised my head, I saw him sheathe his sword slowly, but he slammed it in it's saya out of anger.
“...I didn’t see any kind of reflex to my attacks. What if I aimed for a vital point? What if I was intent on killing you just now?! You would have died, boy!”
As I listened, I tried my best to let go of my wound and reach for my wooden stick, but my father placed his foot in front of my hand to stop me.
“You think you can try again? You’re only wasting your time.”
“But...father! I can still--!”
“No! Lay your sorry excuse for a swordsman on the ground and bleed some more for your failure. Your sister had significant skill when she was your age and was able to endure this training with ease!”
He was comparing me to my sister...who was completely a different person. Yes, Lena was definitely a prodigy, but I really dislike it when I’m compared to others. Though at that particular time as a child, I didn’t understand. I was all about trying to impress my old man. However, he did nothing but return my love with hatred, but I was persistent and tried time and time again to live up to expectations...if he allowed me. I harbored no jealousy of my sister...in fact, I loved her the most out of anyone.
“If you can make it back home without me, then I MAY consider taking you seriously again. I at least taught you survival techniques. Hopefully you aren't a failure at that either...” my father walked off on his own as he was heading back to the direction of our village. “...Until then, take the time you have on your own to think about taking this training more seriously.”
As I watched him walk off, I held my wound again. I didn’t even remember the punch I received after the cut, but when I did, it made my pain worse. I reached out for my wooden sword, but as I kept grabbing it and trying to get a firm grip, I ended up staining the handle with blood. I grabbed the stick I had and tried my best to tie them both around my waist while dealing with the misery of my injury.
When I was finally finished, I limped my way near the path my father took, but he was long gone already. I used a cloth I had to tie it around my wound to at least stop myself from leaking with blood. Despite the village only being a few miles away, it was going to be a real painful journey back. It was like I was left to die. Thankfully, the animals weren't harmful. I just had to survival the walk...
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I finally made it, but the evening struck. It only took so long because I eventually stopped walking several times and ended up losing energy from concentrating too much on my wound. I didn’t have any vulneraries, so I had to improvise with stuff I found on the way. It didn’t work too well, but the bleeding did stop when I made it back. To the point where I barely felt the wound. As such, I slowly entered the village on my way home. I could finally walk without a limp anymore.
I walked through the village and passed through the other Sacaeans from the Kutolah. None of them seemed to be concerned with me...In fact, I don’t even think anyone was paying attention to me strolling along. But that was normal. People just saw me as some stupid kid. But I didn’t care...and I still don’t to this day. Soon, my pain turned to anger. I hated being around others mainly because I was never taken seriously by any of them other than my sister and mother. I still loved my father, despite his resentment for me. But what could I say? I was just a ‘stupid kid’ after all, but that love for him was about to change...
As I was almost at my family’s hut, I was blocked by three other younger Sacaean children when I fell down to my knees from my wound again. Out of any time the pain could come back, why at that moment? Either way, they all seemed to be enjoying themselves as they looked down on me like they wanted to do something to me. I saw them before...days ago. Ever since I accidentally bumped into their little 'ring leader', they all never stopped bothering me...and no one does nothing but watch. Is there entertainment in seeing a child beaten by others? I'd like to believe not and think it was either them ignoring us or just people being bastards.
“Hey, look. It’s Veigue...” the child standing in the middle said with a grin. “Having trouble? How about I help you up?”
I couldn’t believe those words. It was too deceiving. But me, desperately wanting to get back home to father, held out my hand, giving a gesture to help me. My hand got grabbed, but I saw the smirk form on the little bastard’s face as I felt him squeeze my hand and yanked me up from the ground. Then a suffered a kicked to my side and got sent back down. After a few more seconds, the other two joined in and started repeatedly kicking me while I was defenseless in the dirt. I refrained from screaming out of pain so I took the hits, crossing my arms and trying to curl up into a little ball on the ground. I tried closing my eyes to help a little. At least it was working.
I opened them again when I saw my father’s feet behind the children. I thought my father had finally come back for me. Was he going to save me from these brats? But I heard him talking in disappointment again.
“...Veigue? Didn’t I tell you how to defend yourself? If you’re expecting my help, then you’ll have to earn it.” I saw him crossed his arms, waiting. “Show me what I taught you to get these troublemakers off you.”
That was absolutely absurd and heartless thing to say! Was he really going to sit there and watch me get beat up while having my face full of dirt?! Nonetheless, I needed to get those punks off me regardless of what my father was going to do. I felt the rage build up in my heart. I couldn’t take it anymore. I was tired of being everyone’s punching bag. I had to show them that I meant business.
I grabbed one of the boy’s legs and pulled back, tripping him and causing him to hit the dirt on his back. This caused them to stop kicking me for a brief few seconds, which was plenty of time for me to try and get them all back. I pulled out my wooden weapons and started beating one of them mercilessly on his head with them, since he gave me that opportunity when he placed his hands over his head. But the other one grabbed me from behind and pinned me down. The other one I tripped raised from the ground and they all proceeded to kicking me again as I dropped my weapons.
So much for a comeback.
“...Hmph. How disappointing. I don’t have weak children.” my strict parent said aloud.
I tried holding out my hand to my father, but he simply ignored me as I saw him walk back to our hut. For that moment, I finally felt betrayed. How come my childish mind didn't catch on the moment I was left to die out in the plains? He didn’t even give it second thought to help. He left me...just like that. I even saw him enter the hut without looking back. No regret.
...Nothing could express how I was feeling at the moment. I didn’t even feel the kicks anymore. I clenched the ground in my anger. It seemed like I didn’t release all the rage I had back there after all, as I still had faith in my father at the time. That was it...I couldn't take this pain anymore. Both the pain being dealt physically...and the pain emotionally. It hurt so bad, it felt like my entire body was on fire.
Now I was at that boiling point where I found the strength to lift them all off me and didn’t even think about getting my wooden weapons. I lifted myself up and tackled the boy that started all this mess to the ground and started punching him non-stop in the face like a raging beast. I couldn’t control myself...I needed to let it all out. No one should feel how I did at that moment. Plus, the little punk deserved it. People were walking away from the scene, trying not to get involved. So I was alone...
As I tried to calm down, I raised off the boy, who had a bloody nose and bruised up face. When I looked to the other two with a cold stare, they both merely backed off and started walking back as I slowly approached them. I was tired of getting treated like crap. Now I was ready to inflict some of the pain I’ve been feeling throughout my abuse. But the two little punks ran away before I could do anything. If they were smart, they could have taken advantage of my rage and beat me to a pulp worse than before...but that's how fear worked.
I walked to the other I roughened up and kicked him hard enough to jump from the ground and follow his friends, but he was slow due to the pain I inflicted. He doubt this was the end though. Even when beaten, some bullies get persistent if they could push you the way they did to me.
With them gone, I looked down to the ground and stared in space, thinking about everything that just happened. Normally, this would be a perfect time to cry for normal people...but I didn’t. If anything, I’ve always wondered why no matter what happened, I never shed a tear. Of course I cried when I was a small baby, but when I got to that age I was, I couldn’t remember a time I cried at all. I even went as far as to thinking that my eyes were dried up and unable to drop anything. I felt so much sorrow at the moment, but I couldn’t express it at all other than anger. Sometimes, I even doubted if I was a normal human being if I couldn't express my sadness like a normal little boy.
I eventually fell down on my knees, trying to calm down. It was then that I felt someone’s arms wrap around me like a blanket. When I turned my head, it was my older sister, Lena. Her voice was soft as usual, but I can tell by her lower tone in voice that she was hurting pretty badly on the inside.
“...If only father didn’t tell me to stay in, I would have helped. I’m sorry, Veigue...”
I just sat there, still paralyzed in thought. This day turned from bad to evil. Not only did I ended up getting bullied AGAIN, but I had my own father walk off on me instead of being an adult and stopping what unfolded. That man...I couldn’t call him father anymore. In fact, I did exactly what he did to me...I despised him greatly. I only had a mother and a sister then. At least they treated me with respect compared to that bastard and the others of the village. But my sister was always there to comfort me in my time of need. I still respect my mother, but at the time, she was too sick to parent me. Lena basically looked after me all the time. But my mom couldn't help it...she was born with that illness.
“You are strong, Veigue. Don’t let anyone tell you otherwise...show them all. I have faith in you, little brother.”
I didn’t say anything in response. I couldn’t really. But I took those words as an inspiration to get stronger and more skilled...not just stronger in general, but stronger than the ones who put me down, abused me, and despised my existence. Even if I have to respond to them all coldly. I no longer had a reason to act friend towards others like a little kid. I was going to show them all a true warrior of Sacae!