Roland "Wolf" Wymond
Wyvern Rider
Posts: 18
Sacae Fame: 1
Profession: Wandering Knight
OoC Alias: Wolf
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Post by Roland "Wolf" Wymond on Mar 11, 2015 8:58:22 GMT -6
Recently, I've been getting into spriting, so here's some of my work. It's definitely not as good as what I've seen here. Feedback would be great. <Battle Sprite for Roland (Also, i'm not good with hair on battle sprites) <Roland's Mug; Updated < Xavier (A new alt; Updated < Midar Wolf, an alt on another Forum < Leo Wymond; Roland's younger brother; NPC < Nazir; Xavier's mentor in the Assassin's way; Deceased; NPC ((sorry for having different colors for the background, but I didn't actually feel like editing midar or the battle sprite. I'll just use white from now on.))
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Freya Brünhild
Troubadour
It ain't over 'til the fat lady sings!
Posts: 23
Profession: Cleric
Affiliation: Inquisitional Army
Affinity: Thunder
Profile: Freya
OoC Alias: Synkkis
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Post by Freya Brünhild on Mar 11, 2015 18:34:22 GMT -6
There are multiple pixel issues I'm seeing. These are mostly due to one or two being astray in a spot. Wolf's collar and tops of his pauldrons being a good example. A little close-up detail work in MS Paint would do you well.
I'm not sure what is going on with Xavier's shirt, but the outlining is far too dense compared to the rest of the colors used. It makes it stand out compared to the rest of it.
Otherwise, very good splices. The heads don't look impossibly bent in an unnatural direction nor fused with their torso (except Midar, something's off)
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Selibas
Hero
The Little Wolf
My Word is Iron.
Posts: 455
Etruria Fame: -1
Bern Fame: 4
Illia Fame: -3
Profession: Khan
Guild: Tribe of Sacae
Affinity: Ice
OoC Alias: Selibas
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Post by Selibas on Mar 16, 2015 18:39:48 GMT -6
Good splices! I'd suggest using one color for the background though, I never used to pay attention to it, but now I can't help but notice.
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Roland "Wolf" Wymond
Wyvern Rider
Posts: 18
Sacae Fame: 1
Profession: Wandering Knight
OoC Alias: Wolf
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Post by Roland "Wolf" Wymond on Apr 10, 2015 11:49:59 GMT -6
Thanks for the feedback. I updated the mugs and added 2 new ones.
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