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Post by Matis on Feb 15, 2007 21:27:13 GMT -6
Seems good. I only read the first few paragraphs before hitting "the brick wall".
You said I had red hair. In fact, I don't, and never did. Taken from my character's profile(which I should modify...)
Name: Matis Warrior Class: Lord Age: 18 Hair Color: Golden Eye Color: Sky-Blue
Main Weapon: Sword Secondary Weapon: None
Promoting Class: Blade Lord Promotion Item: Heaven's Seal
Clothing: Matis wears a REALLY light chest plate made of Orihalcon, blue colored, with a white undershirt below it, and blue pants.He also wears a blue headband. Country: Sacae
Could you make him have blond hair and, instead of the chest plate, make him have(if you ever mention it, I don't know, I should keep reading it) a blue trenchcoat, and a silver shirt under it(still made of Orihalcon. He got it from his father, who once was a great warrior).
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Post by Alan on Feb 16, 2007 1:14:45 GMT -6
What the bleedin' hell is "Orihalcon"? I never heard of a metal callled that not indeed a metal that needs to be addressed with a name.
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Dray'Gon
The "Before" years
Devoted Dragonfang[M:-100]
"May my ancestors bring me strength!"
Posts: 141
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Post by Dray'Gon on Feb 16, 2007 8:19:12 GMT -6
Orhalicon is a metal material used in certain RP games. One I can recall at the moment would be Golden Sun. I'm sure there's a few others, and I'm not specifically sure it's precise characteristics, but in any case, that is likely where Matis got that kind of armor.
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Post by Matis on Feb 16, 2007 11:38:32 GMT -6
Correct. Mythril, Orihalcon, Dark Matter...you name it. All come from RPGs and books such as Tolkien's "The Lord of the Rings" or "The Hobbit".
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Post by Matthias on Feb 16, 2007 22:06:22 GMT -6
Ah, my bad. I admit to not reading some of the intro posts as closely as I should've. At least it's something I can easily fix...
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Post by Matis on Feb 17, 2007 9:19:36 GMT -6
Thanks.
I've read it all now, and it's quite good. Hope you keep doing it. ^_^
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Post by Matthias on Feb 17, 2007 14:02:25 GMT -6
Just updated it again. I'll do the split posts in the order given by the Plot Recap post (since I read all those before typing the story anway).
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Post by Alan on Feb 17, 2007 15:15:26 GMT -6
Good job, almost makes me wonder why Flyssa didn't mind Themis yet attacked me and burned down any of Calis' wyvern riders she laid her eyes on.
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Dray'Gon
The "Before" years
Devoted Dragonfang[M:-100]
"May my ancestors bring me strength!"
Posts: 141
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Post by Dray'Gon on Feb 17, 2007 17:05:38 GMT -6
Maybe she just fell in love with the first one, and all the others weren't good enough?
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Post by Matis on Feb 17, 2007 17:42:58 GMT -6
Let's accept it, the guy played her like a crazy and clueless magician. And he did so awesomely well.
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Lumino
Sage
The Green Flame Damned Wizard DEAD
To fool your enimies, first you must fool your friends.
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Post by Lumino on Feb 17, 2007 17:44:18 GMT -6
Is that a complement or an insult?
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Post by Matis on Feb 17, 2007 17:56:49 GMT -6
A compliment. >_>
The guy is sane, and played an insane girl like if he were actually insane as well(which doesn't necessarily means he IS insane. He's a really nice[and smart] guy).
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Post by Matthias on Feb 17, 2007 23:14:31 GMT -6
It's odd, but that's how it actually happened... And Flyssa was an awesome character. Reminded me strongly of Serra...
Rath is a lot harder to work with then most of the other characters though... It seemed to me like he didn't have as much personality...
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Post by Matis on Feb 17, 2007 23:24:41 GMT -6
You're completely right. It's almost as if I could imagine Flyssa replacing Serra in FE 7. And everything around her would still be basically the same. XD
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Post by Alan on Feb 18, 2007 5:56:46 GMT -6
Mind you, Serra and Flyssa don't have the same personality. At least oswin could shut Serra up, nobody can shut Flyssa up.
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