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Post by Katara on Jun 12, 2007 16:52:16 GMT -6
Here it is, and it's not that good. Let the critique begin.
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Post by Matis on Jun 12, 2007 17:36:52 GMT -6
The sky blue lines of the headband look rather out of place. Otherwise, it's quite good. The hair looks...bland, as it stands, though. Why don't you try something like this? Of course, this is just an example. Feel free to change it as you see fit.
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Post by Katara on Jun 12, 2007 18:17:46 GMT -6
That does look good. I was more concerned about the ear. Does it look too high, or low for that matter? And also about the head. It seems to go too far back, and I'm in the process of altering it.
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Skye
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Post by Skye on Jun 12, 2007 19:23:09 GMT -6
The headband seems a little akward to me, like its too high up on her forehead. Maybe its just me. Otherwise, it looks pretty good to me.
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Post by Katara on Jun 12, 2007 19:49:37 GMT -6
Like this?
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Post by Kenshin on Jun 13, 2007 3:33:50 GMT -6
Ok, the ear in the first one is fine. But the second one it's a little too low. The top should line up with the eye brows or top of the eye.
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Sergey
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Post by Sergey on Jun 13, 2007 3:47:16 GMT -6
I think the first was a lot better.
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Post by Kenshin on Jun 13, 2007 3:59:09 GMT -6
I think the first was a lot better. agree'd
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Post by Katara on Jun 13, 2007 9:39:19 GMT -6
Here I have some examples for a different coloring of the odd stripe in the headband. Your opinions, please; which should I use, or should I chose a different color? P.S. I kow the parts are cut off, I just wanted to she the band.
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Post by Matis on Jun 13, 2007 11:48:44 GMT -6
The green one looks nice. But that's just me. Also, the picture I gave you was just an example. It was for you to change it to your liking. Besides, it took me about 30 seconds to do. XD
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Post by Alan on Jun 13, 2007 11:50:38 GMT -6
I agree with Matis, go with the second last.
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Skye
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Post by Skye on Jun 13, 2007 11:55:19 GMT -6
That one looks good to me too.
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Post by Katara on Jun 13, 2007 12:17:12 GMT -6
Yes, but I tried putting all the hair over the shoulder, but it looked like crap. I'm still working on it. This is after about the third try: Thanks guys, I like that one too!
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Larissa
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Post by Larissa on Jun 13, 2007 12:40:13 GMT -6
That looks loverly! ^^
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Post by Katara on Jun 13, 2007 12:41:21 GMT -6
I was troubled with the shading...
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