Selibas
Hero
The Little Wolf
My Word is Iron.
Posts: 455
Etruria Fame: -1
Bern Fame: 4
Illia Fame: -3
Profession: Khan
Guild: Tribe of Sacae
Affinity: Ice
OoC Alias: Selibas
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Mirror
Jan 4, 2017 9:01:29 GMT -6
Post by Selibas on Jan 4, 2017 9:01:29 GMT -6
Howdy Mirror, I'm not a mod but I thought I'd try and help ya out.
First thing's first, Taguel are locked to Vinland at the moment, so if you want Mirror to be one, he's going to have to be from Vinland, not Ostia.
Secondly it would be a good idea to try and expand on most everything. What are his likes and dislikes for his personality? How tall is he for the appearance? Stuff like that.
If you need any suggestions or help with site lore and that kinda stuff just let me know.
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Mirror
Jan 5, 2017 14:46:10 GMT -6
Post by Donovan on Jan 5, 2017 14:46:10 GMT -6
Heyya Mirror, if you could take a look at Sel's recommendations, they're pretty spot on. Also, you should put some more thought into the fight sections.
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mirror
The "Before" years
Posts: 0
Profession: Taguel
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Mirror
Jan 5, 2017 15:02:57 GMT -6
Post by mirror on Jan 5, 2017 15:02:57 GMT -6
ok
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