"The Azure Edge" Saito

[Saito]

Name:Saito

Class:Mercenary
Age:24
Born in:Lycia, Pherae
Appearance:He's a Tall muscular man with Blue Greenish hair with light purple eyes. He wears a lighter version that he forged of the Pheraen knight armor with a light blue scarf around him.

Personality:He is a skilled war veteran and is Kind and somewhat trusting. He shows no remorse of hesitation when killing his enemies. He is extremely faithful to his Employees and is willing to die for them. This results in a strange reputation as a mercenary, but will do anything to gain any bit of money. He doesn't care if he has to kill innocents in order to gain money. Most people think he even enjoys killing but he loathes it. This is the only thing that he is excellent at and is a high paying job.

History:Used to work at his mother's farm while his father was a Pherae Knight. He admired his father and when he was 15 he became a Pherae Knight. He had a natural talent for horseback riding and was good with the blade. His swiftness and power made him one of the greatest knights for his age. Three years later his Mother and Father died of an unknown illness. And since there was no one to work on the farm the livestock quickly died. He quit being a knight and become a Mercenary to gain money to take care of his younger siblings Marijaine and Liliana. He is considered a 1 man army and will do anything for money. Because of his blue attire he is called the "Azure Edge".

NPC fight:Saito dodges the ruffian's strike and cuts him down swiftly. He then clashes blades with another Mercenary who he overpowers and stabs him through the chest. He then dodges a Fire Tome blast and kills the mage.

PC fight:On the floor gasping for air Saito knew he could not win against this unknown foe who was ready to kill him. Muttering his last words he says " Marijaine... Liliana... I'm so sorry I..Fa..iled you..please...fo...r..give me..."

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[Leiva]

Okay, just a bit of criticism on your profile. First off, you might wanna clean up your grammar and punctuation. I'm not sure whether that will affect your acceptance or not, but it's good form to present your application in proper grammar.
Next, you really ought to add in more detail to your character's backstory. Why is he considered a one-man army? What has he done to deserve a special title suited just for him? Being regarded as a legendary fighting force needs some serious evidence to back that up.
Thirdly, your fights need a lot of work. Your NPC fight contains far too little detail and paints your character in a ridiculously overpowered light, considering the fact that he cuts down three separate enemies by himself like they were chumps. Your PC fight is also kind of weird, because it implies that his foe beat him easily; all your PC fight needs to be is an example of the kind of post you would write when in a thread where you're in combat with another player character (hence the term PC fight). Overall, it's an alright profile, but what I believe is the most important thing is to back your character's supposed reputation up with some actual details of his exploits.
By the way, I'm not a mod by any means. Just trying to help you out.

[Kenshin]

Essentially he would be that of a level one mercenary, he wouldn't be able to effortlessly block, dodge, and kill everyone in a single strike.