Morgoth Animus
Shaman
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"Save the world? You know not what you say."
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Morgoth
Jul 21, 2009 9:02:05 GMT -6
Post by Morgoth Animus on Jul 21, 2009 9:02:05 GMT -6
Name:Morgoth Class:Shaman Hair Color:Darker than the abyss Eye Color:Blood red Age:16 Appearance:Normal build for sixteen year old with little physical activity besides walking Clothes:Dark red tunic covered by a deep black cloak Born in:Small village in Sacae Story:Found a strange book in an abandoned house.Reading for several months, he soon found he could make things happen while muttering the words in the book out loud.One night he sneaked into a neighbors house and killed his family of three in their sleep to test his power, then running off into the night to find a teacher, or to find out how to control such power. Tuatara's final alt
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Wyatt
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The Volcano
How can someone win if winning means that someone loses?
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Morgoth
Jul 21, 2009 9:05:53 GMT -6
Post by Wyatt on Jul 21, 2009 9:05:53 GMT -6
Ehhhh.....ehhhhhhh....
I have some serious problems with this one, but I'm not sure how to portray them in an objective way that ignores my own biases. I am going to leave this open for another moderator, I don't think I can make a fair decision on this one.
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Morgoth Animus
Shaman
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"Save the world? You know not what you say."
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Morgoth
Jul 21, 2009 9:09:57 GMT -6
Post by Morgoth Animus on Jul 21, 2009 9:09:57 GMT -6
Ok,is he to evil or is it the blowing up thing?
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Aeros
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Morgoth
Jul 21, 2009 9:46:22 GMT -6
Post by Aeros on Jul 21, 2009 9:46:22 GMT -6
...Tut...I think you went a little too far into the LFG Richard's character. Then again, even he doesn't destroy things as willy-nilly as that.
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Wyatt
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Morgoth
Jul 21, 2009 9:55:48 GMT -6
Post by Wyatt on Jul 21, 2009 9:55:48 GMT -6
I don't mind evil, but there is an unspoken rule.
You can be a good character with a sub par application, you are a hero so the worst problem is a little power playing, which is mostly versus NPCs, so we can deal with it.
Evil characters require more. I need to be sure you aren't going to power play and overstep your bounds, because PCs may be your opponents, and that is a whole 'nother can o worms.
If you look in the past forums, Alan and Kenshin are very good examples of 'evil' characters. They were both still heroes as it were, but they were spiteful and violent people.
So yeah, as a villanous and destructive character, I don't think I can allow this. Not to mention that a little reading of your RPing tells me you are inexperienced. Not a bad thing, we all were at once, but I am hesitant to give someone like that a character who may cause a load of trouble.
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Morgoth
Jul 21, 2009 14:47:50 GMT -6
Post by Gabriel on Jul 21, 2009 14:47:50 GMT -6
Putting things bluntly, blowing up entire houses just like that is a no-no.
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Aeros
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Morgoth
Jul 21, 2009 19:24:38 GMT -6
Post by Aeros on Jul 21, 2009 19:24:38 GMT -6
You could say that he killed people to test out his abilities, and then left mysteriously when people started investigating.
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Morgoth Animus
Shaman
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Morgoth
Jul 22, 2009 20:42:04 GMT -6
Post by Morgoth Animus on Jul 22, 2009 20:42:04 GMT -6
I understand, I was trying to have the ability to RP as different kinds of characters.I think I'll slow down and stick to the others maybe use this one later when I'm ready.(Any tips or explanations of what I've done wrong?I'd like to not cheat and have fun.Because I want to get good at this.)
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Morgoth
Jul 23, 2009 0:56:49 GMT -6
Post by Gabriel on Jul 23, 2009 0:56:49 GMT -6
We've pretty much said it, but remember that even if you are a step above trainees, you still start as a level one "normal" unit. Those are very weak in the games, and there's no reason why it should be different here. I guess blowing up houses could be possible with a spellbook such as Gespent or Ereshkigal(or whatever Nergal's book was called). But otherwise? No.
Just try and keep to what your character should be able and shouldn't be able to do. Add some small twists of your own(such as Lilith's dark-energy-charged stones or Hiro's particularly high lust for women) and you're set.
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Morgoth Animus
Shaman
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"Save the world? You know not what you say."
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Morgoth
Jul 23, 2009 9:31:10 GMT -6
Post by Morgoth Animus on Jul 23, 2009 9:31:10 GMT -6
I know,I was mainly trying to show how evil he was supposed to be.(forgot about power play,thanks for bringing it up before I RP) ;D
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Yaen
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Morgoth
Jul 23, 2009 18:09:46 GMT -6
Post by Yaen on Jul 23, 2009 18:09:46 GMT -6
Yeah. Yaen has the physical and emotional scars to prove it.
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Morgoth Animus
Shaman
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"Save the world? You know not what you say."
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Morgoth
Jul 26, 2009 20:55:00 GMT -6
Post by Morgoth Animus on Jul 26, 2009 20:55:00 GMT -6
With the open ending,can he be in a forest somewhere or should I change the location of the village he's from?(Better story?)
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Wyatt
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Morgoth
Jul 26, 2009 20:57:20 GMT -6
Post by Wyatt on Jul 26, 2009 20:57:20 GMT -6
I'll give you a chance on this one. Accepted. BUT. I don't mind if you are evil, that's fine, avoid powerplaying and we're good.
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Morgoth Animus
Shaman
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"Save the world? You know not what you say."
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Morgoth
Jul 26, 2009 21:01:32 GMT -6
Post by Morgoth Animus on Jul 26, 2009 21:01:32 GMT -6
Ok, for his first battle I thought about making him think he's all big and bad and then he gets his butt kicked.
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Shadow
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Morgoth
Jul 26, 2009 22:32:32 GMT -6
Post by Shadow on Jul 26, 2009 22:32:32 GMT -6
By me.
Nah, jk. We'll see.
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