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Post by Deleted on Sept 25, 2012 18:16:13 GMT -6
Name: Redathin Class: Mage Hair Color: Brown Eye Color: Green Age: 15 Appearance: light skin color, 6' 1", light brown hair, 175 lbs. Clothes: Wears a grey shirt with a dragon crest on the chest, black pants, leather boots, and a blue cloak. Born in: Eutria Story: Redathin was born a normal child into a family of four (including himself). Mother died in child birth leaving his father to take care of himself, Redathin and his sister. His father eventually had to give up Redathin (four years of age) and his sister to an orphanage when he couldn't take care of them and keep his job. His sister was quickly adopted leaving Redathin alone. During his stay in the orphanage Redathin spent much of his time reading every book he could find. When he was five he snuck out of the orphanage to try and find his father. He spent almost three days searching and nearly died of starvation. Luckly enough he was found by a traveler, fed, and brought back to the orphanage where he promised never to run away. When he was seven he saw a mage practicing spells and became determined to learn the mystical arts. He found a teacher and studied Anima for seven years, learning the use of anima spells. His teacher died of old age and left him with a small home, several anima tomes, and a small amount of money. Redathin sold the house, gathered the tomes and since has set out looking for a new teacher. Personality: Redathin is a very open minded person and is always willing to learn for someone that is a legitimate source, though if someone tries to make a fool of him he loses all trust in them and tries to avoid them. He doesn't start conversations, but is always willing to chat when spoken to. Likes: - Learning
- Achieving higher goals
- Meeting good, honest people
Dislikes: Aspirations: - To become the best sage there is
- To have a purpose to others
- To keep on living
RP/ Writing Experience: Written a few stories and RP for several months online as well as many times over the table. Any opinions or help are welcome at this point.
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Sakura
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Post by Sakura on Sept 25, 2012 19:27:33 GMT -6
You could use a better picture, but that is not important here. The story seemes alright, but it is a bit to simple, but hay I ain't no profesional writter. Also can you starve in three days. I know you cand dehydrate, but not starve. It takes at least six weeks before you would die.
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Edrick
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Post by Edrick on Sept 25, 2012 19:43:19 GMT -6
sheesh don't like shamans? well then. and you can only start with a fire tome and a vulenary
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Post by Clair Feldsky on Sept 25, 2012 20:15:24 GMT -6
Lol.... Clair doesn't particularly like mages of any sort. Anyways.... I actually approve of simple stories like this, when they still give enough detail, as this one does. Well, most of this looks good to me. As was mentioned, mages start with a fire tome and a vulnerary. Browsing the rules enough will result in finding that. And while we have fairly free reign with what we can do with speels, it needs to match the proper element, and fall within your abilities. Ex: Fire is a weak fire spell. It will allow you to do more as you become skilled, but a lvl 1 mage is not going to be laying waste to a battle. Adaptations to a fire spell should match your In character skill. Etc. So we don't create spells here. Feel free to PM me about magic from time to time though. Sorry to steal your thunder. So are we good?
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Elesia
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Post by Elesia on Sept 25, 2012 20:45:48 GMT -6
Sorry to steal your thunder. you may steal my thunder BUT NEVER MY ELFIRE ELESIA IS THE SWORD THAT CLEAVES EVIL
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Marle Daviau
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Post by Marle Daviau on Sept 26, 2012 6:15:52 GMT -6
Sure thing Sanger Zonvolt~
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Post by Sakura on Sept 26, 2012 8:10:54 GMT -6
Yet again my pride is stumped to the ground. Oh well. Wish you luck and word of advice don't just start random battles in threads even when you are trying to make an excuse to leave it. Trust me I learned from exsperence.
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Elesia
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Post by Elesia on Sept 26, 2012 8:45:46 GMT -6
...
I wonder what it'd be like if Redathin and Elesia met?
Besides a total disaster, I mean. That part is just sort of a given.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 26, 2012 14:40:24 GMT -6
Post has been modified. Let us all grieve the loss of my thunder. (ノಠ_ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻ TABLE FLIP!
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Aurek
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Post by Aurek on Sept 26, 2012 14:47:08 GMT -6
Wait. How is flipping a table grieving the loss of your thunder? Sounds more like rage. Which, if that is true, I suggest we burn the table using your new fire magic. Much more exciting than just flipping out. BURN IT ALL TO ASHES!
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Elesia
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Post by Elesia on Sept 26, 2012 14:51:13 GMT -6
Post has been modified. Let us all grieve the loss of my thunder. (ノಠ_ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻ TABLE FLIP! Puh-LEAZE. Mages celebrate (and grieve... and express happiness... and show anger...) with fire. Lots of fire.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 26, 2012 14:55:20 GMT -6
NOOOOO! My table! *burns down nearby house*
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Edrick
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Post by Edrick on Sept 26, 2012 17:55:38 GMT -6
MAGES EAT MY DARK MAGIC!!! *starts casting random flux*
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Post by Clair Feldsky on Sept 26, 2012 18:20:28 GMT -6
*Noms on fluxes* Alrighty. We have an accord.
Approved.
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Edrick
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Post by Edrick on Sept 26, 2012 18:30:01 GMT -6
well darn no damage XD
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