Orcleous [Butorega's 3rd Alt}

[Orcleous]

Name: Orcleous
Age: 16
Class: Novice
Gender: Male
Hair Color: Black
Born in: (I like this country) Bern

"Apperance: Orcleous is a darkskinned young man who stands at an average height of 5"10". He has broad sholders, and large hands. His skin his rugged from work, and his hair is a wiry mess. He wears a bandana over his head to cover it up.

Clothing: Orcleous wears a dark crimson set of armor, and a crimson bandana over his hair. His boots are also plated, and his hands covered by steel guantlets.

Story: Orcleous is the second oldest of four boys. His mother and father were both farmers who cared not who ruled the country. The only thing that mettered to them was their crops. Their four boys followed in heir parents un carring attitude, and stayed on the farm and worked the land. However hard times hit Orcleous family, and the crop failed. With the failure of thier crop the family had no extra money to buy food ot feed everyone in the house hold. It was decided that one of them would have to leave in order for the family to survive.

Orcleous was not the oldest, but at the the time he was the only member of the family not wed. His eldest brother wife was pregant, and his two younger brothers were engaged to women in the village. See as he was the only person not attached to the area Orcleous volunteered himself to leave the farm. When he left he was givin a potato sack bag, and his mother Bandana, which had been in the family for four generations, and 5 gold.

Orcleous, now homeless, left his home village and aimed to go to the capitol to look for work. Along the way Orcleous came by a battle field were Bern loyalist, and Ilian mercenaries had fought. Desperate for more funds Orcleous lotted the corpses for supplies. Through peiceing togther peices from dead soldiers Orcleous was able to scrap up a complet suit of armor, and an Iron sword from one of the dead mercenaries.

As Orcleous was leaving the battle field he was confronted by a group of loyalist soldiers who saw him pillageing the dead. They arrested him, and took him to their leader a man named Wales D. Gall. Wales seeing Orcleous size and muscular frame decded to make him join their cause. He forced Orcleous to wear the armor, and use the sword to fight for Berns freedom. Thus Orcleous joined the Coalition.


Ok since this is my 3rd Alt I will mention my post count, and characters for mod
Butorega(main) has 47post
Euphemious (2nd) 16
Shugo (3rd) 14

[Hal]

Two things, either lower the age to the 13-16 range or up his class to a basic.

Why did Wales decided to put a criminal on the battlefield?

[Orcleous]

ok I lowered his age to 16. Also why Wales would put a criminal on the field, shock troops. It is always good to have an extra body, and troops are running thin.

[Hal]

Accepted. Side note, putting criminals on the battlefield is just as risky as it is surprising. They could either try to escape or attack them so a guard will be near them at all times and should be rped that way.