Caim Thyodor
Novice
Posts: 6
Profession: mercenary
OoC Alias: caim
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Post by Caim Thyodor on Jun 8, 2014 14:20:56 GMT -6
Name: Caim Thyodor
Class: Novice Hair Color: Black Eye Color: Dark blue Age: 16
Born in: Illia
Appearance: Caim is about 5 ft 2 in terms of size and is relatively thin. His hair is somewhat long and occasionally messy, depending on the circumstances.
Clothes: Caim typically wears all black clothing in the form of a light outfit consisting of a simple combination of a shirt and a pair of trousers. Both of these are slightly loose, however it is all kept together by a black belt around the waist, which isn't as loose as the clothing
Story: Caim comes from a relatively small family in Illia, two of them, his older siblings, being mercenaries. With his older brother and sister being away on different days to make money for the family, Caim lived a rather sheltered life, rarely leaving the safety of his home until about the age of twelve, in which he secretly tailed his brother on a mission. Of course when the brother found out things went down hill rather quickly for the young Caim, although in the end it seemed somewhat beneficial, as Caim was finally starting to leave his sheltered life.
Having been following his brother on many more missions over the next four years, his sister meanwhile had fallen ill, making it that the family couldn't afford much anymore, so in order to follow in his siblings footsteps and try and help, Caim finally decided to step out of his brothers shadow to try and make his own way in the world, where this will take him though... Who knows?
(I apologize if there are many mistakes, only just joined and I'm somewhat brain dead right now)
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Post by Deleted on Jun 8, 2014 14:39:20 GMT -6
Pretty good. Though I have one tiny nitpick I'd like to point out. If Caim was mostly sheltered from being a small kid to twelve, it'd be a little irresponsible for the siblings to just leave him all alone in their home at an age way younger than twelve, since by that age, they are capable of looking after themselves (unless this was intentional or them not knowing better). Did he have a neighbor or anyone looking after him during his much younger days? Was he constantly checked up on? Stuff like that.
But like I said, minor nitpick and it shouldn't really have a heavy influence on your character, but I'm just checking before approving to make sense of the backstory.
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Caim Thyodor
Novice
Posts: 6
Profession: mercenary
OoC Alias: caim
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Post by Caim Thyodor on Jun 8, 2014 14:56:06 GMT -6
That is a fair point, to be honest I didn't think about that due to being brain dead. To answer this, the siblings would probably have alternated, with one staying at home to look after Caim, the other working, the only change being that if a job required both of them they'd ask one of the neighbors to take care of him, which happens more often than not considering their line of work.
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Post by Clair Feldsky on Jun 8, 2014 15:43:02 GMT -6
Or maybe the sister, depending on her age. Welcome to the board, Caim!
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Caim Thyodor
Novice
Posts: 6
Profession: mercenary
OoC Alias: caim
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Post by Caim Thyodor on Jun 8, 2014 15:45:32 GMT -6
Possibly, although I'll probably work all that out tomorrow when i can get on the computer, and thanks.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 8, 2014 15:47:56 GMT -6
All right, that makes sense to me. Accepted.
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Caim Thyodor
Novice
Posts: 6
Profession: mercenary
OoC Alias: caim
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Post by Caim Thyodor on Jun 8, 2014 15:50:24 GMT -6
Okay, i'll probably look for an rp to join in tomorrow when I can get on the computer
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Post by Clair Feldsky on Jun 8, 2014 16:09:59 GMT -6
In the meantime, there is an edit profile button on the Profile page. You can do stuff like link/upload avatars there, as well as alter your display name so it isn't all lower case. Plenty of other options besides the ones I mentioned there, but those are the main ones I use.
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Caim Thyodor
Novice
Posts: 6
Profession: mercenary
OoC Alias: caim
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Post by Caim Thyodor on Jun 8, 2014 16:12:32 GMT -6
I'll probably have a look at that tomorrow as well.
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Rogus
Thief
Arrogance is a virtue.
Posts: 178
Profession: Stealing yo' gold
Guild: SS
Affinity: Fire
OoC Alias: Gus
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Post by Rogus on Jun 11, 2014 17:04:58 GMT -6
His sprite.
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