Lynessa
Manakete
"I am glad Ilia doesn't have summer..."
Posts: 92
Profession: Tavern owner, housewife
Affinity: Ice
Dragon Element: Ice
OoC Alias: Mana
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Post by Lynessa on Aug 3, 2014 1:19:26 GMT -6
===> Better? How's the book? Does it have any wrong pixels or anything? It's custom made. I swear it's 100% my work, not stealing.
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Saturos Prox
Swordmaster
The Wildcard
I'm almost incapable of lying. I'd be a terrible spy.
Posts: 351
Etruria Fame: 1
Profession: Undercover Operative
Affinity: Anima
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Post by Saturos Prox on Aug 3, 2014 14:56:02 GMT -6
Looks good to me
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Lynessa
Manakete
"I am glad Ilia doesn't have summer..."
Posts: 92
Profession: Tavern owner, housewife
Affinity: Ice
Dragon Element: Ice
OoC Alias: Mana
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Post by Lynessa on Aug 5, 2014 1:02:21 GMT -6
Another new mug. This one for Lynessa
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Post by Charlotte on Aug 5, 2014 11:35:09 GMT -6
Eh sure, I'll sacrifice my 1st born to the almighty Richter ohwaitOkay, so I've started working on a half-body for Charl. Working from the bottom up. Whole base is outlined, and I've currently got the bare bones of this colored in (boobs & arms not included in colored in spot). I need suggestions for colors to use for shading; I want to use FE 8, but I honestly just need a forest green for the cloth and a dark brown for leather. They just need to have enough depth to really get the curves right. Also, pls critique the what outline you can see; is it looking realistic, correctly sized for FE, etc etc? (this is a front-facing half body, BTdubs). Anyone who has a critique is more than welcome to state what you see, not just Richter. THANKS.
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Post by Richter Abend on Aug 5, 2014 11:41:03 GMT -6
Lynessa: Mug looks good but the scarf looks a little shiny. Not sure if that's what you're going for. @charlotte: I'd stick with FE8 for this sprite, since it looks like you're going for something darker. Outline looks like it may need to be a little bigger. If that excerpt is part of a full body outline, slap a FE sized head on it and see if it looks right.
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Post by Charlotte on Aug 5, 2014 12:56:54 GMT -6
Obviously not shaded, etc etc, but how are the outlines looking? I thickened the waist a bit, but I'm overall happy with the proportions so far.
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Post by Richter Abend on Aug 5, 2014 13:16:37 GMT -6
I'm not seeing anything too wrong with that so far
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Post by Charlotte on Aug 5, 2014 13:19:10 GMT -6
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Post by Richter Abend on Aug 5, 2014 13:21:36 GMT -6
WELL OBVIOUSLY IT DOESN'T LOOK PERFECT YET!
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Asri
Thief
"I am a good person. Why won't you believe me?"
Posts: 101
Profession: Thief, spy, informant, etc.
OoC Alias: Mana
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Post by Asri on Aug 5, 2014 13:47:50 GMT -6
That's a mantle not scarf
Too shiny? Okay, I am going to tweak the color a bit later So......When will I graduate from this academy, richter-sensei?
@charlotte: That half-body looks great. I hope I know how to draw half-body.
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Post by Charlotte on Aug 5, 2014 14:04:39 GMT -6
WELL OBVIOUSLY IT DOESN'T LOOK PERFECT YET! =P Asri, Thank you! I figured I'd do something productive while sick. Richter Abend, How's this? Finished filling everything in, now the fun begins just kidding, i hate shading
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Saturos Prox
Swordmaster
The Wildcard
I'm almost incapable of lying. I'd be a terrible spy.
Posts: 351
Etruria Fame: 1
Profession: Undercover Operative
Affinity: Anima
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Post by Saturos Prox on Aug 7, 2014 15:17:15 GMT -6
That's a mantle not scarfToo shiny? Okay, I am going to tweak the color a bit later So......When will I graduate from this academy, richter-sensei? @charlotte: That half-body looks great. I hope I know how to draw half-body. Color-wise, going from a really bright color to a really dark color creates a kind of shiny sheen look. Also when you stop taking classes Richter Abend, How's this? Finished filling everything in, now the fun begins just kidding, i hate shading You already know my opinions on this, but I thought I'd leave a compliment for you anyways. It looks good!
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Bones
Brigand
RETIRED
Posts: 97
Profession: Bandit
Affinity: Fire
OoC Alias: Butorega
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Post by Bones on Sept 2, 2014 15:43:09 GMT -6
Alright Richter here is another one for you to hack at Attachments:
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Post by Richter Abend on Sept 3, 2014 14:42:07 GMT -6
That's pretty solid. Not much to fix except for the roughness on her left (our right) cheek.
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Borgus
Acolyte
DEAD
Getting money is easy. The ahrd part is keeping it.
Posts: 90
Profession: Bandit
OoC Alias: Butorega
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Post by Borgus on Sept 3, 2014 21:59:26 GMT -6
Alright Richter have fun with them
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