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Max
Oct 27, 2009 19:20:28 GMT -6
Post by morgoth on Oct 27, 2009 19:20:28 GMT -6
Name: Max Class: Shaman Hair Color: Dark Brown Eye Color: Green Age: 22 Appearance: Moderate length hair, moderate build (not too heavy but not too skinny either), about 6'0 Clothes: Torn and rugged travelling robes Born in:Ilia
Story: Born to two loving parents in north Ilia, Max grew up in a secluded valley where he learned to love nature and the rugged beauty of the world. At the age of 7 his parents noticed that their son had exceptional ability in the magical arts, to their surprise he refused to leave the valley to learn how to control his gift.
Tragedy struck when his parents were murdered by a theif and Max was left to fend on his own, seeing his parents cut down in front of him. Max, while terribly scared from this experience, has learned that life is tough and has learned to deal with his emotions.
After the incident at his home, Max began to teach himself more about this "talent" he had. The mourning within him had turned his magic darker, and he learned the dark arts of the Shaman.
Having finally left his small valley home, Max was now ready to explore the world and hopefully put the memories of his old home away while discovering the beauty he loves so much.
(I think thats good =) lol)
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Max
Oct 27, 2009 20:00:46 GMT -6
Post by Gabriel on Oct 27, 2009 20:00:46 GMT -6
I find it kind of hard that he managed to practice his gift while still being in a secluded valley in Ilia. That COULD be fixed, if one of his parents was a Shaman/Druid, and had some books on the dark arts in the house, though.
As soon as that's fixed, I say you're accepted.
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Max
Oct 27, 2009 20:05:43 GMT -6
Post by morgoth on Oct 27, 2009 20:05:43 GMT -6
Well its supposed to be he had a minor understanding of magic and after the death of his parents it sort of went "corrupt".
I'd understand if he was level 10 or something and then you said its hard to believe, but if hes level 1 its reflecting his inexperience with the magic.
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Max
Oct 27, 2009 20:11:29 GMT -6
Post by Gabriel on Oct 27, 2009 20:11:29 GMT -6
Oh, wait. The story never mentions WHEN the accident happened. If it happened at some point between when he was 7 and him being 15, then the time would be more than enough for him to go to Etruria or elsewhere and be taught about magic.
Seeing that, I guess it all fits. Accepted.
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Morgoth Animus
Shaman
DEAD
"Save the world? You know not what you say."
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Max
Oct 30, 2009 15:18:28 GMT -6
Post by Morgoth Animus on Oct 30, 2009 15:18:28 GMT -6
Nooo! One more Shaman I have to waste time killing! (XD)
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