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Alec
Jan 16, 2010 17:31:17 GMT -6
Post by Deleted on Jan 16, 2010 17:31:17 GMT -6
Name: Alec Class: Archer Hair Color: Orange Eye Color:Blue Age: 20 Appearance: Alec has a kind, handsome face and a slim build. Clothes: Standard archer fare; Alec wears a green tunic with a leather shoulder guard Born in: Lycia (Laus) Story: Alec was born into a poor farming family. He was the younger of two children, and his older sister, Nya, was frail and sick, causing her to be unable to help their parents. While his father managed the farm with the help of his mother, Alec was always trying to do all he could to help. He would go hunting for deer to provide extra food for his family, and once he got reasonably good at shooting, he would preform stunts in the village for money. He kept most of the money he made, saving it away for a way to heal his sister. One day while preforming a rather difficult shot, he met a passing bishop of great skill. He offered the bishop all of the money he had made, and by using a powerful staff, the bishop healed his sister of her childhood ails.
His parents, though somewhat angry their son did not tell them of the money he made, were thrilled. His sister grew stronger, and , a year later, his parents no longer depended on his bow. They believed that every young man should go on an adventure, and, with a tearful farewell, sent their son to find his personal treasure.
*Lilith's last alt*
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Alec
Jan 16, 2010 17:39:32 GMT -6
Post by Rayl Torien on Jan 16, 2010 17:39:32 GMT -6
What is this madness?! NO ONE DIED IN THE STORY! D:
Anywho, all jokes aside I like it, though we obviously have to wait for the mods to say their peace.
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Jan 17, 2010 1:20:43 GMT -6
Post by Gabriel on Jan 17, 2010 1:20:43 GMT -6
God. Hate the centering. Everything's fine, but due to Lycia's size, it'd be best if you picked at least a region in it(say, for example, Ostia, or Caelin, or Pherae, or anything).
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Alec
Jan 17, 2010 9:07:37 GMT -6
Post by Deleted on Jan 17, 2010 9:07:37 GMT -6
Sorry, I fixed it.
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