Aren
The "Before" years
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Aren
Jan 20, 2010 23:05:27 GMT -6
Post by Aren on Jan 20, 2010 23:05:27 GMT -6
Name: Aren Class*: Nomad Hair Color: Brown Eye Color: Green Age: 32 Appearance: Thin around his face, short brown hair. Around 5'9' Clothes: wears light armour. Born in**: Sacae
Story***: Aren is born from Maria and John, Maria was a Troubadour and his father a archer. Aren had a happy family until he was 4. His mother got killed by a bandits army as most of the healers died in his town. To get revenge he started to train himself with a bow. Not just to take revenge, he just wanted to help. His father never wanted him to do but he didn't mind.
At the age of 10 he was finally great with a bow and went out to hunt. When he was out there, he saw a great horse but it was getting attacked. He helped him by using his bow and he helped the horse his wounds.
When the horse was finally healed, he was allowed to ride on him and he tried to shoot with his bow. This was much better for him since his arching skills weren't that great as normal archer bu as Nomad, he could hit.
And so the years has passed until his father passed away on Arens age of 26. It hit him hard as he would never come back to his tribe again. So he grabbed his horse and started to ride days to find a group, that he could join to fight for peace. He found. Rayl.
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Aren
Jan 20, 2010 23:48:47 GMT -6
Post by Rayl Torien on Jan 20, 2010 23:48:47 GMT -6
I approves being in here, and despite mild spelling errors, I think it's great (and not because of being mentioned). Sure it has a death, but a story of revenge is always fun. Maybe some more description would be cool, but that's just my opinion, seeing as I ain't a mod to accept or deny ya.
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Aren
Jan 21, 2010 11:23:44 GMT -6
Post by Gabriel on Jan 21, 2010 11:23:44 GMT -6
I suppose the last sentence means that he found and joined Rayl? >_>
I see no big problem with it. You just need to specify a promoted class, though. Accepted.
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