Gaven
The "Before" years
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"No sir ,I didn't mean to trip on my lance it just happens"
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Post by Gaven on Mar 7, 2011 17:15:27 GMT -6
Okay I am making a hack for fe 7 and this is one of the mugs I am thinking about putting in-  His name is Philip and is going to be replacing Guy. The thing is he has around the same as Guy’s personality. ((Whew. Some of the other characters...not so much.)) So tell me what your thoughts are on this. NOTICE: Please suggest suggestions ((emphasize)) on how to improve the mugshot or if it isn't creative enough.The evolution so far: |
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Post by Richter Abend on Mar 7, 2011 17:23:47 GMT -6
The neckline is off. His head seems oddly shifted backwards and there's no shading, plus there's a bit of weirdness under his ear.
The hair is a bit messy in the back, and you could probably afford to clean that up a bit, as well as his bangs. They have no outline and no shading to differentiate them from the rest of his head.
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Gaven
The "Before" years
[M:20]
"No sir ,I didn't mean to trip on my lance it just happens"
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Post by Gaven on Mar 7, 2011 17:29:14 GMT -6
Thanks Ritcher will get right on that.((or will try  )) |
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Farlus
Mage 
[M:0]
You had better hope I can make use of you.
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Post by Farlus on Mar 7, 2011 17:56:49 GMT -6
Compounding on to what Richter said, the hair looks like it's floating above his head rather than growing from it.
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Gaven
The "Before" years
[M:20]
"No sir ,I didn't mean to trip on my lance it just happens"
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Post by Gaven on Mar 7, 2011 18:58:54 GMT -6
 - My second try. The hair was messed up because I didn't do the coloring right ((lol)) I am going to try the shading effect Farlus told me in the cbox. Also this ones hair looks cleaner but not the face part... v3-  scared how many V's i need this one has shading. ((well attempt of course)) I was told that i did my shading wrong so i tried again....  |
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Synkkis Kyyneltya
Shaman
"Strange... I had no brace for the aberrant nature of this power."
Posts: 170 
Profession: Mercenary Tactician
Affinity: Dark
Profile: Synkkis
OoC Alias: Cyril/Lucien/Landrik/Freya
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Post by Synkkis Kyyneltya on Mar 7, 2011 21:35:58 GMT -6
The huge thing I see that's a problem is the hair. His face is facing straight on and is not tilted to the side, which the hair is doing. Here's some suggestions:
Swap out the hair for another.
Edit the hair so that it rests easy in the back and it fits his head. Then, adjust the line of the scalp to fit the head.
Try to think of how he would look if he was bald. Is his head appropriate? Then, lay down the hair like how it would naturally grow from there. Then you get to do all the fancy stuff.
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